This is heartbreak in motion — like watching something leave that was never supposed to go. The repetition of “try!” hit me hardest. It’s so real, that desperate hope we hold onto even when we know it’s too late.
Your words carry the ache of something unfinished, like love that didn’t reach its full height. I felt Ethel Cain in the glassy sadness, but also something uniquely yours — a quiet surrender that somehow feels like healing.
You captured a feeling I didn’t have words for until now. I’m so glad you wrote this. Please keep going.
Alice,
This is heartbreak in motion — like watching something leave that was never supposed to go. The repetition of “try!” hit me hardest. It’s so real, that desperate hope we hold onto even when we know it’s too late.
Your words carry the ache of something unfinished, like love that didn’t reach its full height. I felt Ethel Cain in the glassy sadness, but also something uniquely yours — a quiet surrender that somehow feels like healing.
You captured a feeling I didn’t have words for until now. I’m so glad you wrote this. Please keep going.
Thank you so much Sai! I absolutely loved your comment, it made my whole day :)
This is beautiful thankyou for appearing on my algorithm
thanks to you!!! :)
this is so beautiful! im trying to get better at writing (especially poetry, its my "passion") and this is so inspiring. keep up the great work <3